Thread:B214/@comment-24421137-20140926035010/@comment-1359322-20140927045852

The prologue is a bit lousy.


 * "The seven sword star tournament is near, and the participation matches begins."

This is too general, it sounds like a summary or story telling of sort, it kinda gives off a feeling that your going to generalized this for all the fights.

The Aftermath only mentioned from Shizuku's side. Try to go a bit into Suga as well.